Still i feel...
she is awake early
just for me
waiting somewhere
Still i feel...
she gets upset
and cries , whenever
i get upset
Still i feel...
she'll hold my hand
and support me
whenever i fall
Still i feel...
She'll come to me
whenever she's down
or upset
Still i feel...
She'll see my love someday
take me in her arms
and never let go...
Still...
19 comments:
this is awesome!! how do u get them? my belief is getting stronger!!hmmmm :P
thanks for the comment meenal...
But there's none...
didn't you see the lonely picture???
That is absolutely beautiful. So heartfelt, passionate and with a yearning so sweet. Very well done.
thanks a lot Joanne!
hey .....dta truely.......lovable....yaar......i jus love the passion in it......gud goin yaar........
thanks Priya!
broo u rock ur..... u can scrible the sad feelins on sheet of paper... n its tough.... n readin these poems.... it feels lik pain that i bear in ma heart. keep it up...
bhai ek no......bt still u will find her smeday.......
touchin lines..made me remember someone who i can never forget...good goin bro...its a great job done by you..it has touched the heart of a person like me...whom u know as a bindass bannda...hats off
Gud Goin'........:)
Nice poem mr aditya
I will thank if i can shared your poem in my blog .
btw,i was follow you,so dont forget to follow me back
Regard from Indonesia
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its very gud......
who's she ha?
awesome yaar.....
bro this one of the best creations.....the word is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
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awsum..
2 c guy lyk u..
is so..
serios abt certain stuff..
its really grt tat u ryt such kind n special stuff..
mean a lot 2 me bhai....
bhai its really grt to c..
tat u hv such a hidden talent..
i mean it dost..
its awsum..
tat ur wrds cmpletly r impeceable..
its juzz lyk..
dere's much more to ryt..
bt all r grt 2 read...
this one is awesome yaar!! very god one. i loved it
thanks a lot Akshita!!
:))
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