Friday, January 15, 2010

Still...


Still i feel...
she is awake early
just for me
waiting somewhere

Still i feel...
she gets upset
and cries , whenever
i get upset

Still i feel...
she'll hold my hand
and support me
whenever i fall

Still i feel...
She'll come to me
whenever she's down
or upset

Still i feel...
She'll see my love someday
take me in her arms
and never let go...

Still...

20 comments:

Meenal said...

this is awesome!! how do u get them? my belief is getting stronger!!hmmmm :P

Aditya said...

thanks for the comment meenal...
But there's none...
didn't you see the lonely picture???

Poetic Shutterbug said...

That is absolutely beautiful. So heartfelt, passionate and with a yearning so sweet. Very well done.

Aditya said...

thanks a lot Joanne!

priyansha said...

hey .....dta truely.......lovable....yaar......i jus love the passion in it......gud goin yaar........

Aditya said...

thanks Priya!

boon said...

broo u rock ur..... u can scrible the sad feelins on sheet of paper... n its tough.... n readin these poems.... it feels lik pain that i bear in ma heart. keep it up...

ashish said...

bhai ek no......bt still u will find her smeday.......

jassi khanuja said...

touchin lines..made me remember someone who i can never forget...good goin bro...its a great job done by you..it has touched the heart of a person like me...whom u know as a bindass bannda...hats off

Ankita said...

Gud Goin'........:)

Make Your Poem said...

Nice poem mr aditya

I will thank if i can shared your poem in my blog .

btw,i was follow you,so dont forget to follow me back

Regard from Indonesia

makeyourpoem.blogspot.com

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PURVI said...

its very gud......
who's she ha?

ARUSHI said...

awesome yaar.....

malay said...

bro this one of the best creations.....the word is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

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prince : unflinchi calculatin machin said...

awsum..
2 c guy lyk u..
is so..
serios abt certain stuff..
its really grt tat u ryt such kind n special stuff..
mean a lot 2 me bhai....

prince : unflinchi calculatin machin said...

bhai its really grt to c..
tat u hv such a hidden talent..
i mean it dost..
its awsum..
tat ur wrds cmpletly r impeceable..
its juzz lyk..
dere's much more to ryt..
bt all r grt 2 read...

Akshita Jain said...

this one is awesome yaar!! very god one. i loved it

Aditya said...

thanks a lot Akshita!!
:))

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