The moment I saw you crossing me by
That moment, that look I had of you
Oh my... I wanted to fly
The cutest girl I had ever seen
I could see nothing but you, precious
You amazed me more than I had ever been
Desired to feel your skin, so flawless
I urged to have your hand in mine
And your soft lips, I so wanted to caress
My eyes still wide, it was such a treat
It was like you cast a spell on me
You now control the rhythm of my heartbeat...
7 comments:
jus wanna say iz ek tarfaaaaa!!
"Beautiful" - You amazed me more than i have ever been.
Keep writing and keep on amazing people like me.
I could visualize the scenario while going through each word.
Pure Skill !!!!
gr8 wrk Aadi..havnt met this part of ur personality... visualization is gud..keep writing...RJ Kinshuk
Good Going Aditya !!
Emotions are conveyed beautifully ....
gr8 work !! keep it up n keep amazing me wid ur writing ....
It's unbelevble.......I have seen alot but I was not aware of ur this talent......would like to say just ""WOW""
Its amazing hw u put ur beautiful thoughts wid these beautiful chosen words....
It reminds me of John donne Third Anniversary
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